Morphene arms,vicodin smile,narcotic eyes,
Duragesic skin,marijuana hair,acid tongue.
Percocet lips give chemical kisses.
Intoxicated heart.
Numb body and mind.
Bong hopes and pipe dreams.
Needle songs and opiod lullabyes.
Smothered soul,
Tired life.
Dillusions fill my head,
Intrusions in my bed.
Pleasure-seekers disguised as prince charming,
Alarming,isn't it,how we're all so easily led astray,
Pray?
To whom?
An imaginary God that shall one day,"save us all,"
Call -out to him do I,but my pleas are lost in the air.
Aware -now,that I'm truly...all alone.

i would really like to know what you guys think of my writing.I have alot more poetry on previous posts under june,july,august etc..i have pics posted also of me ,my kids and artwork i did a few yrs back,i have just recently started painting and drawing again,do keep in mind that i was very young when i did them! theres 3 paintings,one of the sun and mnts was my 1st i did when i was 11,the other 2 i did when i was about 17,the drawing i did about 2 yrs ago.There's also some artwork i found on the internet that i thought was cool.I've been considering going to a poetry reading so i wanted to get honest opinions on my work to help decide which ones i should read.Please don't be too harsh though!

IF LOVE...
If love was a color it'd be the hue of your eyes,
that see the lovliness beneath my sad disguise.
If love was a scent it'd be the fragrance of your skin,
that embraces me so tightly,no matter how long it's been.
If love was a vision it'd be the sight i see,
that nourishes my soul,everytime you look at me.
If love was a sound it'd be your voice when you say my name.
And if love was a dream then just maybe-you would feel the same.